Sunday 24 February 2013

'Scarlett' Chapters 2 - 4

Alrighty, folks. After much internal debate, decided to put a few pages of my newborn story here. Please no copying and pasting. Ack! Kind of scary sharing such a new idea, but it's going pretty well and want you guys to give me feedback, in the comments section please! Constructive criticism highly welcomed. Basically, the story revolves around Lani (18) and Scarlett (25), alternating perspectives, who grew up in the same town but never meet until the last chapters, after both having left their hometown to travel when a shooting devastates Lani's highschool. Lani struggles with the homophobia of her small town in these chapters, before she decides to leave home, where she lives with her psychotic stepbrother, Bryson. Scarlett is questioning everything about herself- from her relationship with Ben to her job to her sexuality. Being the beginning of the story, both characters haven't developed much. So grab a cuppa, read on, and let me know what you think!
xo



Lani
August 3rd

Red pricks on white skin
Blood red roses against the pallor of new snow
Snow White has been sleeping inside me for
Too long now
To retreat from this crimson bordered ivory coast
Contrast of harshness in the stark red lines
Against the virginity of untouched flesh
I always go far enough into the redness
For a sharp burst,
But never enough to let the whiteout win


      
     Control is a funny thing really. There are certain things in life that some people believe you have complete power over, but in reality, you are a slave to a brutal mix of fate and hormones. Brain chemicals, like an army working against your every will power. Things in your life like grades and jobs and friends you can decide on. But other things, like sexuality, you can’t.
     I knew I liked girls when I was fourteen. But I pushed those desires to the corner of my heart where daylight can’t reach. I feared for my own lusts, my own heartbeat. I felt wrong, dirty. Girls my age were supposed to like boys. And I did. I mean, I liked how they all liked me. I’m pretty enough, sexy some might say. I have the sunset golden skin and big brown eyes. I have the gloss-covered hair and the curves that swell like cresting waves. I liked how my boyfriends’ hands fit perfectly over them, protective, possessive. I liked how they wanted me, needed me. That gave me power.
     Control.
     But there came a time, last spring, that I couldn’t push my feelings into the background anymore. Her name was Laura. She had black hair and blue eyes and skin like blushing roses. Baby soft. We met in a cafe on the other side of town and spent a whole summer drenched in lust and dusted with love. We were blindly searching each other’s bodies for fulfillment, satiation. I needed her like a mother and she needed me like the ocean needed the shore.
     But like all intense, leaves-your-heart-throbbing summer romances, ours ended in a downpour of autumn tears this fall as the leaves tumbled to the ground around her onyx hair in a spill of gold and ruby. She left me to the harsh October winds without protection, robbed of comfort.
     


                              Scarlett
August 5th
                I roll over in the queen size bed, my arm wandering across Ben’s broad chest. I watch as the skin expands as he sighs, stretching his white tee shirt and raising my hand. I look at the creaseless-ness of his face; the smooth skin and long eyelashes. My hand inches towards his neck, and I kiss his shoulder. He rolls over and sits up in the dark. The alarm clock shows five o’clock in red letters. It’s too warm in here.
                “What’s wrong?” He turns to look at me, his torso still facing the wall. His eyes look annoyed, deprived of sleep.
                “What do you mean what’s wrong?” I’m confused by his worry.
                “Why did you wake me up?”
                “I didn’t mean to wake you. I just-“ I trail off, realizing that it is a lost cause. “Why don’t you reach out to me anymore, Ben? Why am I always doing the reaching?” His face is blank.
                “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” He gets up and pads to the bathroom. I roll onto my back and stared at the wood-planked ceiling. Five years. My mother had always told me that five years would be the be all and end all of a relationship. That’s when the heart-wrenching desire fades to television watching and who’s going to turn off the bedroom light. I remember her saying, her eyes somewhere distant.
                No. My relationship with Ben is not going to dissolve, a mere victim of time and circumstance. What we have is too special, too rare. I searched long and hard for Ben and I’m not about to give him up now.
                He returns and slips beneath the covers. I look out the window at the pinkish light of dawn. Suddenly, the five o’clock morning looks more enticing than staying here in this too warm bed.
                I release myself from the warmth of the suffocating covers. Release my mostly naked, save for Ben’s oversized button down, skin from the entrapments of cotton and linen. Walk, feet pressing on hardwoods, to the window. Peek through the opening in the layered curtains, rose gold light meeting my tired eyes like espresso.
                In a flash of lightning, I am downstairs and out the door, dressed in white shorts and a loose camisole. My auburn hair falls in bed head, last-night curls, around my shoulders and my brown purse is slung across my right shoulder, cross-body.
                The cafe is mostly empty at this time of morning. There’s the odd workaholic in suit and tie, and collegiate with a paper due at nine, bags swelling under their eyes. The bll tinkles above my head and coffee machines whir behind the bar, the scent of roasting beans wafting to my nose. I step up to the counter, to be met by my favourite barista, Shelley.
                “Hey there, love, what can I get for you this morning?” Shelley asks in her usual fluorescent voice.
                “Um, I think I’ll have the vanilla cappuccino, please.”
                “Coming right up,” she moves behind the coffee machines and starts steaming milk and pumping syrup.  “How are you these days? Enjoying the summer break?”
                I pause before I answer,
                “Yeah. Yeah I am. I’m working part time at as a columnist for the Mitchell Times, so that keeps me busy. I go in Monday, Wednesday, Friday.” Today’s Tuesday, so Shelley looks at me with a hint of suspicion as to why I’m up so early. “I needed some air,” I feed her, and she nods.
                “So how are you and Benjamin doing?” She always addresses Ben by his full name. Guess that’s what happens in a small town like Mitchell.
                “Good. He’s good. We’re good.”
                The same suspicion etches in her eyes.
                “I’m glad to hear it, honey,” she says as she hands me the cappuccino, extra hot with extra foam.








Lani
August 7th

Pressure
Expand
Contract
Try to breathe beneath the weight of his secret
Transferred onto you by osmosis
Of deceit
Breathe in
Breathe out
Don’t think
Obey

     Bryson’s couch is prickly under the bareness of my thighs. I wriggle to find comfort in the hell hole of a living room, not much living going on here, but I only cause the red chafing to increase. I’m uncomfortable in the silk and mesh of the baby doll he pulled over my head.
     I take in my surroundings. I haven’t been in Bryson’s house since I was young, maybe eleven or twelve. I know his games, or tricks, I should say. I’ve been living without parental guidance for a while now, and things were never PG for me. At least then, my mom was still around to look for me. To send the cops bang bang banging on his front door. To pull me from his claws like a princess. Now I’m eighteen and there will be no one looking for me.
     I know the deal. I wear the lingerie, I paste the makeup on the dry skin of my face, hide the chapped lips with the richest red of lipsticks. I sit on this couch or that bed and I wait. I wait for him to bring in the men with wandering hands and devious eyes and unfulfilled lives. I lie back and wait until I am covered with their release and then I clean.
     But I will never be clean.
     I catch a glimpse of myself in the mirror on the dresser. My dark brown hair is spiked in its usual pixie cut, and my eyes are traced with kohl. My lips are red like snow white and I have the skin to match. Three dollar bronzer could never hide the pallor of ghosts behind my skin.
     I hear a knock on the door. I whip around, ready to face the next suitor. But all I see is Bryson, alone. When he opens the front door of the small rancher he brings in the night air, and it swirls around me. I can picture the stars if I close my eyes long enough. Bryson is my step brother. He trades a place to sleep for whatever he wants. Unfair, but such is life.
     “Hey honey.”
     “Bryson.” My tone is colder than ice water, trickling over the smirk on his lips.
     “What’s with the face? No johns tonight, thought you would be happy. I had a cancellation,” He brings out his diary, all professionalism, “so we get to discuss The Plan.”
     I hadn’t thought about The Plan since I was fourteen. That’s when he went all quiet and didn’t tell me anything, not even me.
“Now,” He chuckles to himself, a horrible cackle of a chuckle that chills me to my bones. “Now, we take it to a whole new level. We will have the whole world seized by terror. And this is the key; this is the key, honey.”
     “Stop calling me honey,” my voice was whisper soft, like footsteps on damp pine needles.
     “What was that? Honey, you are going to be The One. It has to be you. It will shock them more than the act itself! A girl, a girl with small bones and a small stature. A girl! This will be the best plot the world has ever seen! A little girl, that’s you honey, staring at them down the barrel of a gun!” He grabbed the skin of my bicep and pulled me into his bedroom. The tears pricked through the barrier of my mascaraed eyelashes and poured rivers of blackness down my cheeks. He flipped on the dirty light switch and illuminated the horribleness. Newspaper clippings and hand-drawn sketches adorned the black walls, covering them like morbid wallpaper from floor to ceiling. My breath was coming in short spurts, just enough oxygen so that my head would not explode. There were pictures of me, from a two-year-old up until now. He had drawn handguns and stuck them onto my hands in every single picture.
     “I am not a murderer!” I screamed into the room.
     “Oh honey, you will be. You will be. Just you wait.”





Scarlett
August 9th

            This summer seems to be going on forever.
            I mean, at the end of June, I couldn’t wait for long, hot days without any screaming children. Without any books to read or quizzes to grade or parents to meet.
            But I’ve realized that my teenage years of hot, sticky summers are long behind me. And now I’m left with a boring job behind a grey desk with a flashing cursor begging me to write boring articles. And when I come home, I’m met by a man who has tricked me into a five year relationship of the same week on repeat.
            Okay, I guess he didn’t trick me into it. But all the same, I resent him for it.
            When I was sixteen or seventeen, I used to dream about being in my twenties. All the things I would do, all the people I would meet, all the life experience I would gain. Instead I caved beneath the pressures of my high school teachers, my friends, and my parents, and I settled. Instead of taking my full scholarship to an arts school in San Francisco for painting, I chose the monotony and comfort of becoming a teacher in a good school. I would have a solid job for as long as I wanted, with good pay and good benefits. And I told myself that I would be fulfilled, helping kids. But really, I wished every single night that I was still painting, that I had held on to that ultimate dream of being able to make a living on a paintbrush and canvas.
            And with the monotony of my job came the security of Ben. The strong comfort of his embrace and the sureness of his deep brown eyes.
            We were on the path to having it all, and we talked openly of having kids. Of getting a dog and going for Sunday walks, watching a movie with the family on Friday nights, and going for brunch.
            So why, when I saw that unmistakable plus symbol on the pregnancy test a year ago today, did I suddenly feel a knot tightening in the pit of my stomach? Why did I start trembling with panic, my hands shaking and tears welling up in my eyes? Why, instead of rushing to tell Ben, did I rush to Planned Parenthood and wash the embryo right from my uterus?
            I remember that day like the sterile bed was only hours ago beneath my shaking body. I drove to the clinic, no tears, all business, without even a thought of calling Ben. Okay, maybe the thought raced through my mind once or twice. But every fiber of me screamed not to tell him. So I didn’t. When I got to the centre, it was mostly empty. Pro-lifers in this town have been itching to shut down the dilapidated clinic for years now. A single pasty grey haired lady sat behind the front desk, issuing me a form and assigning me to a cold plastic chair. The inhabitants of the clinic consisted of a young girl, maybe thirteen or fourteen, nervous as a butterfly. There was also a couple, around twenty-five or so. The last party was a girl, around sixteen or seventeen, with layers of cheap eyeliner surrounding her large brown eyes. A suspicious could of blue edged its way towards her temple. Her short hair curled timidly around her ears.
            My name was called and I was ushered into a procedure room, where I was given a gown and told to lie back.
            I waited, staring at a poster on the wall of the digestive system. I remembered my high school teacher discussing the various purposes of the liver and I remembered how I wanted to throw my textbook at her all year long. I remembered the chiseled football player who I had a huge crush on for a few months, until I found out he was dating a complete airhead cheerleader.
            That’s what was running through my mind. I wasn’t thinking of the tiny life forming inside of me, of the way Ben’s face would inevitably crumble when I told him months later, of what getting rid of this baby revealed of our relationship.
            I should have known we were doomed right from that day.
            But instead I pushed, I tried to make our love work because ‘love isn’t found, it’s made.’






Lani
August 11th
     
I don't wear rainbows on bare skin to spite you
To threaten your community, your wife, your children
I don't fight for my rights against you
Against God, against trust, against family
I don't love someone in order to offend you
To scare you, to threaten you
I wear rainbows because sometimes the darkness is so black
So opaque from the way you stole my rights from me
That I need something bright, something hopeful
I need something to show me that one day,
One day our love might be equal



“Hey Lani,” Matt Grant’s voice floated toward me across the warm wind currents of the Mitchell Pier. I was seated on a wooden bench, my arm resting on the round metal armrest. A journal was propped on my crossed knee, and I was peacefully staring into the dark blue abyss that was the ocean. I loved watching the ocean, of being so close to something so infinite, so endless, with so much potential, so much freedom.
     I jumped. Snapped my leather journal shut.
     “God, Matt, you scared me.” I looked into the eyes of the tall football player that, if I was so inclined, I would probably get lost in. Matt never seemed to catch the drift, or maybe he just thought that I needed the ‘right kind of guy’ to put me straight. Or so to speak.
     He winked. God, I hated that wink.
     “Enjoying the sunshine?” His voice was heavy with insistence.
     “Yeah, I was.” Emphasis on the ‘was’.
     “Well, how’d ya like to join the guys for a smoke? I know a really cool place near the trees where some real entertainment goes on later tonight.” The way he said ‘entertainment’ made my skin crawl. Seriously, the guy’s had one too many concussions.
     “Matt, honey, I’m really sorry. I don’t know what I need to tell you. You know I don’t roll that way, and even if I did, I wouldn’t be rolling with you.” I couldn’t resist adding that last bit on there. The way his eyes drooped almost made me regret it. Almost. Because sure enough, they quickly turned from grey to red-hot. He put up that muscle-head wall and looked at me with eyes of stone, of steel.
     “God, you Lesbos are so fucking unbelievable. You’re such bitch teases, making us watch you all girl-on-girl. Seriously. You’re fucking lucky I invited you to join us. Normal girls would kill for that position. Fuck you, Lani.” With that, he grabbed my journal and hurled it off the edge of the pier. He stormed away, back to his buddies in the trees.
     That’s the common attitude around here. There’s no such thing as just loving someone of the same sex. If you’re a girl, you’re a dangerously sexual tease who just needs to find the right man. If you’re a guy, you’re a pussy who needs to man up and grow some balls. Either way, there’s something broken in you. And the citizens of this godforsaken town have taken it into their own hands to fix you.
     I look over the edge; don’t see my journal anywhere near the surface. Fucking idiot, I had just written some really good stuff in there. Oh well. I grab my sweater and leave the bench, not looking behind me as the sun recedes below our horizon.
     I’m walking up the grey pavement of the beach parking lot, my mind on my lost words and my heart lodged in a strange place between indignation and embarrassment, when I see her. Laura, walking along Main Street, her black hair cascading down her back, over her white chambray shirt, as she laughs and curls her hand around a blonde girl’s. Wait. She’s with a blonde girl. I walk toward them without meaning to; the girl has long light blonde hair and huge blue eyes that seem to hold galaxies. It is a stark contrast to my dark brown pixie, and suddenly I want to hide my plain green eyes away from the blistering sunlight.
     “Lani?” I look up. Crap, I must have walked right up to them. Subtle.
     “Oh, Laura, hi,” I stammer, looking up into her matching green eyes, the same as mine, like I used to look into them for countless days and not nearly enough unremembered nights.
     “This is Elizabeth,” She gestures to Blondie, their hands never breaking contact.
     “Call me Lizzie,” Blondie speaks.
     “Hey. Um, I was just-“
     “How are you?” Laura looks into my eyes with concern, but that store-bought kind of concern you save for the mentally ill and strangers, that more concerned-for-yourself kind of concern. What happened to us?
     “I’m good.” I start to turn away.
     “No, really, how are you,” she grabs my wrist, pulls me toward her. Lets go of Blondie’s hand. And it’s last summer again. I look up at her and betray the tiniest bit of truth before pulling away. But not fast enough. Her eyes catch the ugliness protruding from my sleeve, angry red lines proving that I’m far from okay.
     “Lani...” Her voice trails off, because I am no longer hers. No longer hers to protect, hers to keep safe, hers to harbour from the storm. I am my own, and she is Lizzie’s. Blondie makes that clear as she regains hold of Laura’s hand, and pulls her slightly away, retracing their steps. Retracing their steps away from me.
    
                                Scarlett
August 13th

            I could leave him.
            Pack up my bags; leave my key on the counter, maybe a note for good measure. I could walk out of his life and maybe just find what I’m looking for, maybe just find a heart that completes mine like they said they do in the movies.
            I remember when I was little and my parents were in love. I remember the stolen kitchen kisses when I wasn’t looking. I remember hands placed on knees while driving on long road trips with no drama, I remember love notes and small smiles and surprise chocolate bars.
            But I also remember the sunlight giving way for thunder clouds, the greyness seeping into our lives and driving a wedge between the two most important people in my life. I also remember screeching tires and separate homes and anger.
            And then I remember the final, resigned friendship that they both agreed to, for my sake. I remember how they said barely a word to each other in passing, how they barely acknowledged the other’s existence.
            I didn’t want Ben and I to become like that, living out our life because marriage vows tied us to it
I could quit my job, drive far away, not looking back as my tires screeched out of the driveway, like my dad’s had done so many years ago.
I think the driveway still wears tire marks like scars to remind us of that night.




1 comment:

  1. Couldn't stop reading, can't wait for the next part <3

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